Alex Nesbitt is an Irish French Canadian girl with a very adventurous spirit. As a new CEGEP student, some of her goals for this school year would be to put as much effort as she can in her work in order to achieve with great success, as well as to meet interesting new people with whom she can socialize with. Alex is a girl of many talents: she can draw and write, as well as cook very well (she attended a culinary school for a year in the past). She is a girl who loves music and art, as well as traveling.
As it happens, one of Alex’s biggest achievements was when she took the ambitious decision to go live in Wales for six months after she graduated from high school. She left on her own to go live there with several families she found on the internet. Now that Alex has traveled overseas, one of her goals for her future would be to go backpacking across Western Canada, somewhere a little closer to home. She would also love to travel, perhaps to Ireland or France (where she has family) or to Germany (where her best friends lives), as traveling is something she is very interested in. Finally, one of Alex’s long term goals would be to live abroad.
Marianne, interesting text, however, your introduction could be better. You need to work on your sentence style.
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